I know you're in the middle of moving and such, so I thought I'd drop another comment because I am once again reading this story and though you might like to know someone is enjoying one of your works while you're dealing with the stress of moving.
This chapter might be my fave. It's got everything that the story had been building towards, like the swell of the wave just as it crests, and the ride was just as smooth. Your original characters are so much fun (Jake! Chase!) and Tim Wayne the Socialite Phenom is so well executed in your hands it makes me really wish that char was canon. The easy banter between Kon and Tim is just a joy to read and Clark's inclusion is like a cherry on top (which I guess makes Lois walnuts?).
And then there's that kiss. That steamy, steamy kiss. I don't think Tim was quite expecting that. Oh this story. So good. Thanks again for writing it. Hope your move goes well.
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Date: 2011-01-04 08:09 am (UTC)This chapter might be my fave. It's got everything that the story had been building towards, like the swell of the wave just as it crests, and the ride was just as smooth. Your original characters are so much fun (Jake! Chase!) and Tim Wayne the Socialite Phenom is so well executed in your hands it makes me really wish that char was canon. The easy banter between Kon and Tim is just a joy to read and Clark's inclusion is like a cherry on top (which I guess makes Lois walnuts?).
And then there's that kiss. That steamy, steamy kiss. I don't think Tim was quite expecting that. Oh this story. So good. Thanks again for writing it. Hope your move goes well.