Still not done
Nov. 23rd, 2009 02:19 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
So close. So close. Almooooost finiiiished...
Oh look, I ran out of screen.
If everyone was going to stare, anyway, they might as well give them a show. Kon bent Tim back over his arm, making the kiss deep and wet and as filthy as he could make it. He licked across Tim's mouth, showy and sloppy as something out of a porno flick, licked his teeth and his tongue. He pressed their bodies tight and just went for it, kissing Tim like they were fucking right there on the dance floor, open-mouthed and panting. And Tim gave back as good as he got, biting Kon's lips, sucking his tongue, deep and hard - moaning, one hand cupping the curve of Kon's skull, the other sliding down to grip his ass and pull their hips together.
At least I got to the makeouts.
I've been editing in between writing bits, so half of the story is actually already about ready for the web. This knowledge is helping me not freak out quite so much.
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Oh look, I ran out of screen.
If everyone was going to stare, anyway, they might as well give them a show. Kon bent Tim back over his arm, making the kiss deep and wet and as filthy as he could make it. He licked across Tim's mouth, showy and sloppy as something out of a porno flick, licked his teeth and his tongue. He pressed their bodies tight and just went for it, kissing Tim like they were fucking right there on the dance floor, open-mouthed and panting. And Tim gave back as good as he got, biting Kon's lips, sucking his tongue, deep and hard - moaning, one hand cupping the curve of Kon's skull, the other sliding down to grip his ass and pull their hips together.
At least I got to the makeouts.
I've been editing in between writing bits, so half of the story is actually already about ready for the web. This knowledge is helping me not freak out quite so much.
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Date: 2009-11-23 08:43 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-11-24 02:56 am (UTC)My ovaries did a happy dance. Dude, you already have a fan!
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Date: 2009-11-24 04:30 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-11-24 03:06 am (UTC)MAKEOUTS
Time to go read them in context.