I don't think I've actually commented on this before, but I love love love love LOVE this story. This is a fantastic little AU world you've created. It is beautiful and wonderful and lots of other good adjectives. I love the characterization of well, everyone actually, but the Batfamily especially, and the epic!fail that is Jay and Tim figuring out their relationship. I really enjoyed the glimpse of the other heroes at the party (lololol green octopus in the pool)... which I probably shouldn't have mentioned because now I want to list all my favorite parts, but that would involve pretty much typing your whole story back at you, and since, as the authors, I'm pretty sure you already know how it goes, I don't think I will bother.
...The smut is pretty fantastic, too. >:D
I'mma have to bookmark this so I can come back to it again and again and read the new bits as they come out. I hope you two will keep this going for a good long while. <3
...Oh, and three cheers for using On The Bus Mall. One of my favorite songs from my all-time favorite band, and every time I read this I get it stuck in my head. ^_^
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Date: 2010-06-17 08:00 pm (UTC)...The smut is pretty fantastic, too. >:D
I'mma have to bookmark this so I can come back to it again and again and read the new bits as they come out. I hope you two will keep this going for a good long while. <3
...Oh, and three cheers for using On The Bus Mall. One of my favorite songs from my all-time favorite band, and every time I read this I get it stuck in my head. ^_^