Oh my god, this is so good. I really wasn't intending on reading this fic, because I don't care one way or another for Tim/Kon, but yesterday at around 4 in the morning I followed a link and opened a tab and decided I'd read it when I'd had some sleep, and I am so glad I did.
I love your dialogue and your character voices. Kon loving Smallville but hating Smallville High is such a good piece of characterization. All three hybrid-related interactions were touching and made sense (and on a somewhat shallow note, it's so good to read a teacher who's not gratuitously written as snotty and unreasonable!) - Martha and Kon bonding is a highlight - and you did a really solid job establishing Kon and the reader's connection to Matt, imo, especially with such a short and mundane scene.
My favorite part of the Tim/Kon dialogue was ALL OF IT, what with Tim saying that Matt having a record wouldn't make him any less of a victim (♥ ♥ ♥ I love Bats), the awesome fishnets line, and the cameras. Kon may want to talk to Clark or Dick about that last.
So happy I still have all those chapters waiting for me!
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Date: 2011-03-18 12:04 pm (UTC)I love your dialogue and your character voices. Kon loving Smallville but hating Smallville High is such a good piece of characterization. All three hybrid-related interactions were touching and made sense (and on a somewhat shallow note, it's so good to read a teacher who's not gratuitously written as snotty and unreasonable!) - Martha and Kon bonding is a highlight - and you did a really solid job establishing Kon and the reader's connection to Matt, imo, especially with such a short and mundane scene.
My favorite part of the Tim/Kon dialogue was ALL OF IT, what with Tim saying that Matt having a record wouldn't make him any less of a victim (♥ ♥ ♥ I love Bats), the awesome fishnets line, and the cameras. Kon may want to talk to Clark or Dick about that last.
So happy I still have all those chapters waiting for me!