This was a joy to read. I loved everything from the clear, complexity of Kon's characterization to the thick and twisty plot and a million other little things you did. The OCs were really fleshed out and compelling and I think Jake is definitely one of my favorites :D. The Tim/Kon interaction felt very natural and I like that Kon (nor I) still don't know if Tim acting like he wanted Kon was just that, or more. And the message behind it was beautifully executed and made everything Kon went through all the more real. Brilliant story, I enjoyed every second of it =D
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Date: 2009-12-07 11:08 am (UTC)I loved everything from the clear, complexity of Kon's characterization to the thick and twisty plot and a million other little things you did.
The OCs were really fleshed out and compelling and I think Jake is definitely one of my favorites :D.
The Tim/Kon interaction felt very natural and I like that Kon (nor I) still don't know if Tim acting like he wanted Kon was just that, or more.
And the message behind it was beautifully executed and made everything Kon went through all the more real.
Brilliant story, I enjoyed every second of it =D