Aw... I like how you wrote the mother. I like Tim running away like that at the end. I like Kon being left with a mouthful of hay and dust. I like how you're bringing in the dead kid's boyfriend.
I like Tim being pissed off about the unconscious undressing!
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Date: 2009-12-18 05:26 am (UTC)I like Tim being pissed off about the unconscious undressing!