It seems I have not commented on this before. Shame on me.
You do have a knack for writing things down to earth so that the stories you tell don’t become to alien for the reader, so that they can still get in touch with the story, so to say, even when it do stray from realism.
Hope that made sense.
Anyhow, this line here: They're not too big, not too small, a perfect handful or, heh, mouthful.
That made me snort but it also reminded me of that one-time-I-can’t-quite-remember when Tim hade to sneak in to another hospital, as a girl, and ended up listening to Alfred’s boob psychology lecture. That Bruce was listening in on. Which just made me extra snort.
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Date: 2011-01-02 12:38 am (UTC)It seems I have not commented on this before. Shame on me.
You do have a knack for writing things down to earth so that the stories you tell don’t become to alien for the reader, so that they can still get in touch with the story, so to say, even when it do stray from realism.
Hope that made sense.
Anyhow, this line here: They're not too big, not too small, a perfect handful or, heh, mouthful.
That made me snort but it also reminded me of that one-time-I-can’t-quite-remember when Tim hade to sneak in to another hospital, as a girl, and ended up listening to Alfred’s boob psychology lecture. That Bruce was listening in on. Which just made me extra snort.
Anyway, well done :).