So this left me brain dead from the intensity. I had to take a breather before I could leave coherent feedback!

This was exceptionally well done. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time, eagerly pushing the down arrow to read what was next. I was that enthralled by Dick's role playing and the effect that it had on Tim. Tim's playfulness that gave way to disbelief and finally to wantonness. The progression of emotions and reactions was so natural.

And Dick! What a sneaky little thing he turned out to be. I loved how he kept slipping back out of character, only to slip back in with force. He was having his fun, to be sure, but his caring nature still came through. You could tell that he was still the attentive lover, despite the role he was playing.

I very much enjoyed the ending. And I find myself speculating on how Tim gets Dick back...after he gets out of his cuffs and all. I imagine Tim will be quite delighted in planning out his retaliation on Dick, and I'd so love to see that

Fantastic job! Thank you for sharing this with us!!