Wow... I have to wonder why Tim told Kon about the cameras... Well, I know, because I read parts of the next chapter. But, really, Tim does like to make a big splash with his announcements, doesn't he? No sense in getting people to like you when you can make your point very aggressively! That's Tim to a T. He learned it from Sherlock Holmes.

This really does seem like it has plot and is going somewhere interesting. I'm intrigued to read more. I might even make it last, not just gobble it down.

(I also liked the part about the sterile hybrids and the "statistically true" about the perps being part of the family.)