AHHHHHH! *hugs you* I love you! I am so in love with this AU!
Okay, first, the link for "Looking Out for the Little Guy" is broken, so you may want to fix that.
Second, I adore this story. I love Jason's paranoia, right up to the end, and Tim's instant comfort and ease with the whole situation. I love how Tim traces the "RG" and how he doesn't actually *wear* the pajamas. I love how Jason is still trying to control the situation, even though he has no idea what's going on. I love how Tim is getting aggressive now that he *can*.
Really, I just love everything about this. When it's done, you really must post it EVERYWHERE, because people are going to just die when they read it.
Third, if I'm going to post the kisses, I should probably flesh it out a little, maybe write the whole "first job" they pulled? There's just...not much to it right now.
And fourth, I will *totally* write porn for you, honey. I was thinking about it all afternoon after the first time I read this (then I had to go out, and was distracted the whole time!) BUT I want to talk to you about timing and continuity a *bit* more before I do. You've done such a good job of writing Jason as both suspicious and sensitive that the set-up is going to have to be delicately handled if we're to make it work.
Thank you so much for writing and posting this! It completely made my day, even if I ended up thinking about Timmy and Jay in a tub together all afternoon.
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Okay, first, the link for "Looking Out for the Little Guy" is broken, so you may want to fix that.
Second, I adore this story. I love Jason's paranoia, right up to the end, and Tim's instant comfort and ease with the whole situation. I love how Tim traces the "RG" and how he doesn't actually *wear* the pajamas. I love how Jason is still trying to control the situation, even though he has no idea what's going on. I love how Tim is getting aggressive now that he *can*.
Really, I just love everything about this. When it's done, you really must post it EVERYWHERE, because people are going to just die when they read it.
Third, if I'm going to post the kisses, I should probably flesh it out a little, maybe write the whole "first job" they pulled? There's just...not much to it right now.
And fourth, I will *totally* write porn for you, honey. I was thinking about it all afternoon after the first time I read this (then I had to go out, and was distracted the whole time!) BUT I want to talk to you about timing and continuity a *bit* more before I do. You've done such a good job of writing Jason as both suspicious and sensitive that the set-up is going to have to be delicately handled if we're to make it work.
Thank you so much for writing and posting this! It completely made my day, even if I ended up thinking about Timmy and Jay in a tub together all afternoon.