ohmigawd, this is so lovely! You portrayed the atmosphere and Tim's inner feelings in just a couple of paragraphs - that's amazing. Usually I am frustrated by ficlets (big giant teases, is what they are), but this left me totally content and sighing happily. ^_^
And hello, Jessie! I am a very recent pioneer of your writing. Got attracted by all the smutty wonderful porn, but became your devout fan after reading Close to Home. WOW, what a great story. And you're So Good! I am just so excited by how good of a writer you are! I love how concise you are in your descriptions, and pacing, and even the "good bits." Everything flows smoothly and character reactions are justified, and really, my only complaint is that you don't post every day. :D (if wishes were ponies, right? lol)
Anyhoo, thank you for sharing with the world. I am happy to find a writer active in the DC fandom, and totally psyched to find a GOOD one. XD
~Olga, who has your journal on RSS and checks every day. I'm just saying. :D~
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And hello, Jessie! I am a very recent pioneer of your writing. Got attracted by all the smutty wonderful porn, but became your devout fan after reading Close to Home. WOW, what a great story. And you're So Good! I am just so excited by how good of a writer you are! I love how concise you are in your descriptions, and pacing, and even the "good bits." Everything flows smoothly and character reactions are justified, and really, my only complaint is that you don't post every day. :D (if wishes were ponies, right? lol)
Anyhoo, thank you for sharing with the world. I am happy to find a writer active in the DC fandom, and totally psyched to find a GOOD one. XD
~Olga,
who has your journal on RSS and checks every day. I'm just saying. :D~