ext_49625 ([identity profile] ava-jamison.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] iesika 2010-09-19 04:02 pm (UTC)

I really enjoyed this! Like Matches, always, and you've written him excellently here. Love the action-centered way you've written him and his dialogue. I also like the way you decided to write Bruce processing his last memory (at the bar, while he touches his bandage) and the way it moves from one part to the other. My favorite line: "I don't think you're really a nurse."

Great story!

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